My apology for my late post...here is my comment on you presentation. Hopefully it will help you with improve your presentation skill.
Positive points: I could see in your presentation that you were confident and sure about what you were talking about and that you are an expert in the field. Never mumbled. Appropriate pace and pausing.
Suggestions: More efficient use of intonation will help people note what is important and what is not so. Maybe more facial expressions will help too. Even when you made a joke your face looked quite serious. If it was on purpose, maybe to show that you are really serious about it, I think it is fine but some people might take it as that you are nervous or uncomfortable standing in front of the audience. Especially this time that the theme was what you are 'passionate' about, it is better you show your excitement with your facial expression.
Overall, the topic you chose was quite interesting and catchy. I personally gained some knowledge from different aspect about Christmas. You saw how people went 'へ〜〜' neh:)) Well-done!
Hi Danielle Happy New Year!
返信削除My apology for my late post...here is my comment on you presentation. Hopefully it will help you with improve your presentation skill.
Positive points:
I could see in your presentation that you were confident and sure about what you were talking about and that you are an expert in the field.
Never mumbled.
Appropriate pace and pausing.
Suggestions:
More efficient use of intonation will help people note what is important and what is not so.
Maybe more facial expressions will help too. Even when you made a joke your face looked quite serious. If it was on purpose, maybe to show that you are really serious about it, I think it is fine but some people might take it as that you are nervous or uncomfortable standing in front of the audience. Especially this time that the theme was what you are 'passionate' about, it is better you show your excitement with your facial expression.
Overall, the topic you chose was quite interesting and catchy. I personally gained some knowledge from different aspect about Christmas. You saw how people went 'へ〜〜' neh:)) Well-done!